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The Oxygen Debt

Chapter 4

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Updated Sep 28, 2026

I wiped a smear of toxic, sulfurous soot from my visor, which only succeeded in spreading the gray sludge directly across my line of sight. When I first woke up out of the Printing Pod, my biggest worry was whether the manual algae terrarium would produce enough oxygen for me to sleep through the night. Now, I was standing on a platform of artificially cooled magma, trying to catch a falling spaceship.

The launch pad was a literal hellscape, a monument to the chaotic, improvisational survival tactics that defined our existence on Zemlola. The hasty ceramic patch we’d slapped together for Stinky’s launch had miraculously held, but the rocket's exhaust had melted the surrounding regolith into a jagged, uneven crust of cooling magma and obsidian slag.

And now, we had to clear it. Manually.

"If my internal temperature gauge climbs another two degrees, my Atmo Suit is going to start slow-roasting me like a pacu fillet," I grunted, driving a heavy tungsten pry bar under a slab of solidified slag. The suit's internal cooling loops were whining, the liquid coolant struggling to dump the ambient heat into the already overburdened environment.

"Less complaining, more leveraging," Bubbles shouted back over the screech of the heavy rover's treads. She was wrestling with the vehicle's controls, her face a mask of soot and grim determination behind her visor. The rover’s scoop bit into the magma crust, the metal groaning in protest as it tried to scrape the landing zone flat. Bubbles was our rock, the one who kept the ranches running and the food growing while the rest of us chased the stars, but right now, she was just another tired duplicant fighting the elements.

The heat radiating from the pad was immense. The thermal mass of the cooling rock was fighting a winning battle against us. I could still taste the acrid tang of lead and ozone in the back of my throat—a lingering souvenir from the near-suicidal Heavy-Watt wire bypass Ledward and I had rigged in the main transit corridor just a few cycles ago. My fingers throbbed through my insulated gloves, the skin blistered from handling the semi-molten lead wire that had saved the colony's telemetry link when the central transformer blew.

Speaking of Ledward, the bionic duplicant was working beside me, a living, functioning reminder that technology didn't eliminate our problems; it just gave them a metallic sheen. His right arm was completely locked, the servos fused into a scorched titanium skeleton after the electrical overload. He didn't complain. He just used his good left arm to drag chunks of heavy slag out of the drop zone, his optical sensors whirring as he calculated load-bearing vectors.

"Structural integrity of the ceramic patch is compromised by thirty-four percent," Ledward noted, his voice a calm, synthesized monotone that contrasted sharply with the apocalyptic environment. "I advise against dropping a multi-ton orbital capsule directly onto it. The underlying igneous rock has not fully solidified."

"Noted, Ledward," I said, heaving my weight against the pry bar until the slag cracked and broke free. "But unless you can convince gravity to take a cycle off, that's exactly what we're doing."

We were ignoring our own bodily needs—the parching thirst, the gnawing ache of empty stomachs, the sheer, bone-deep fatigue that threatened to drop us where we stood. We didn't have time for breaks. Up in orbit, Stinky was out of time.

"Zemlola Base, this is Trailblazer One," the comms crackled to life. Stinky’s voice was thin, reedy, and laced with a desperate kind of panic. "Telemetry is green, but my HUD is flashing red. I mean, literally. The console says my food reserves are at exactly zero kilocalories. I think I just hallucinated a giant, floating Mush Bar outside the viewport."

A Mush Bar. The compressed block of dirt and water that we used to choke down in the early cycles. If he was hallucinating that, his brain was truly scraping the bottom of the barrel.

I tapped the side of my helmet to open the channel. "Hold it together, Stinky. You've got zero calories, but you're still breathing. We've got a fresh batch of Barbeque waiting for you in the Great Hall. You just have to bring her down."

"Bring her down," Stinky repeated, the words sounding hollow. "Right. The automated descent sequence is completely fried from the power surge. I have to do this manually."

"You're an artist, Stinky," Bubbles chimed in, not taking her eyes off the rover's scoop. "Think of the atmospheric entry as a... a dynamic performance piece. Just paint us a nice, smooth trajectory."

"A performance piece where the canvas is on fire and the brush is a metal box hurtling at terminal velocity," Stinky whimpered. "Got it."

The reality was grim. Stinky was a decorator who had somehow been drafted into the space program because of a clerical error in The Voice's priority assignments. Now, he was starving to death in a tin can, clutching the orbital research data banks that were the whole point of this miserable expedition. The starvation mechanic wasn't just a warning light; it was a physical shutdown of the duplicant body, a creeping lethargy that made every movement a monumental effort.

"Initiating manual retro-burn," Stinky announced. "Angle of attack is... I don't know, it looks pointy."

"Keep your nose up," I instructed, watching the telemetry data stream across my wrist display. "Watch your thermal limits. If you come in too steep, you'll burn up before you even see the pad. If you come in too shallow, you'll skip off the atmosphere and we'll never see you again."

The sky above Zemlola, usually a dusty, oppressive orange, began to streak with a brilliant, terrifying white light. The emergency descent had begun.

"He's coming in hot," Bubbles warned, throwing the rover into reverse and backing it away from the center of the pad. "Really hot. Everyone, clear the drop zone!"

I dropped my pry bar and jogged toward the reinforced bunker at the edge of the pad, Ledward matching my pace with his lopsided, one-armed gait. We huddled behind the blast shield, looking up through the reinforced glass.

The Trailblazer 1 capsule tore through the thin upper atmosphere like a falling star. The friction was turning the hull into a glowing cherry-red teardrop of superheated metal. The screech of tearing air and stressed alloys echoed across the colony, a deafening roar that vibrated in my teeth.

"Velocity is exceeding recommended parameters by forty percent," Ledward stated calmly, his optical sensors tracking the fireball. "Probability of catastrophic lithobraking is high."

"Lithobraking means crashing, Ledward," I muttered, my eyes fixed on the descending light.

"Correct. The kinetic energy transfer will be... substantial."

"Pull up, Stinky, pull up!" I yelled into the comms, even though I knew the static of reentry would drown out my voice.

The capsule was a meteor, trailing a plume of boiling coolant steam and ionized gas. I could see the retro-thrusters firing in erratic, desperate bursts as Stinky fought the g-forces and his own exhaustion to keep the craft oriented. The heat shield was taking a beating, shedding ablative layers in a shower of sparks that rained down over the industrial sector.

The final moments of the descent were a blur of noise and violence. The main retro-rockets fired with a blinding flash of thrust, kicking up a secondary storm of dust, loose slag, and acrid smoke from the pad.

The Trailblazer 1 slammed into the ground with a bone-rattling crunch that knocked me off balance even inside the bunker. The capsule hit the hastily cleared zone, metal shrieking against the igneous rock. The ceramic patch we'd relied on spiderwebbed instantly, cracking under the immense kinetic energy. The capsule skidded, tearing a deep gouge through the cooling magma, before finally grinding to a halt against a berm of solid slag.

Silence fell over the launch pad, heavy and absolute, broken only by the hiss of venting steam and the sharp pinging of contracting metal.

"Stinky?" I called out over the comms.

Static.

"Stinky, report."

Nothing.

"Move!" Bubbles yelled, already sprinting out from behind the bunker.

I followed, Ledward right behind me. The heat radiating from the capsule was intense, the hull still glowing a dull orange in places. The smell of scorched metal and burnt ozone was overpowering. We reached the capsule, our boots crunching on the shattered ceramic tiles.

The main hatch was warped, the locking mechanism jammed from the impact.

"Ledward, the pry bar," I ordered, pointing to the tool I'd dropped earlier.

Ledward retrieved it and handed it to me with his left hand. I jammed the heavy tungsten tip into the seam of the hatch and pulled. My muscles screamed, the accumulated fatigue of the past few cycles crashing down on me all at once. Bubbles grabbed the bar alongside me, her boots finding purchase on the slick slag, and together we heaved with everything we had.

With a loud, metallic groan, the locking pins sheared, and the hatch popped open.

A cloud of stale, sweat-scented air puffed out of the cabin, carrying the distinct odor of fear and unwashed duplicant.

Inside, the Trailblazer 1 was a mess of blinking warning lights and loose wiring. Stinky was slumped in the pilot's seat, pale, trembling, and looking like he had lost ten pounds. His eyes were wide, staring blankly at the main console. But his arms were wrapped tightly, protectively, around the glowing blue cylinders of the orbital research data banks.

"Did... did I park it okay?" he whispered, his voice barely audible over the hum of the dying life support systems.

I let out a breath I didn't know I was holding. "You parked it perfectly, buddy," I said, reaching in to unbuckle his heavy crash harness. "Right between the lines."

Ledward stepped forward, offering his good hand to help haul the artist out of the capsule. Stinky's legs gave out the moment his boots touched the ground, and I had to catch him, slinging his arm over my shoulder. He was incredibly light, his body completely depleted of energy.

"I saved the data," Stinky mumbled, clutching the drives to his chest. "The Voice... The Voice will be happy."

"The Voice can wait," Bubbles said, her voice softening as she looked at the exhausted pilot. "Let's get you to the Great Hall. I think we have some pickled mealwood with your name on it."

"I want a burger," Stinky sighed, his eyes fluttering shut. "A big... greasy... Jorge-style burger."

"We'll see what we can do," I promised, adjusting my grip on him.

As we began the slow, limping walk back toward the main airlock, leaving the smoking ruin of the Trailblazer 1 on the shattered pad, the familiar, intrusive chime of The Voice echoed in my headset.

*Mission successful. Orbital data acquired. New directive: Immediately deconstruct the Trailblazer module and relocate the launch pad three tiles to the left. Priority: Urgent.*

The Voice didn't care that Ledward was down an arm, or that Stinky was currently running on a caloric deficit that defied basic biology. It only saw the grid, the overlay, the endless pursuit of perfect efficiency that always seemed to result in maximum chaos.

I stopped, looking back at the molten slag, the broken ceramic, and the steaming capsule. Then I looked at Ledward's destroyed arm, Bubbles' soot-stained face, and the starving, half-conscious pilot leaning on me.

We had built a civilization not because we did everything right, but because after every disaster, someone stood up, fixed the pipe, and kept working.

"Tell The Voice," I muttered, tapping my comms off, "that we're on a lunch break."